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I have many favorite actors, but among them, I really like American actor Tom Hanks.
Although he had a hard time as an unknown actor for a long time, he began to gain popularity when the movie Sleepless in Seattle, which he starred in at the age of 37, became a huge hit. and soon after, he won the Academy Award for Best Actor for his role as a gay man with AIDS in the film Philadelphia.
And he won the Academy Award for Best Actor for the second time for his role in the movie Forrest Gump, where he played the main character who lacks intelligence but grows into an adult and experiences a variety of experiences thanks to his mother's devoted care.
I have so many questions about him.
When I meet him, I want to ask him how he endured the long life of an unknown actor, and how he was able to play so many roles so realistically, including a gay man with AIDS, a widower in love, and an intellectually disabled child.
And I would like to ask him what he thinks of his life as an actor.

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Hey there, Sun!

Thank you for doing your homework tooday. See you tomorrow!

I have many favorite actors, but among them, I really like American actor Tom Hanks.
>> Correct.
Although he had a hard time as an unknown actor for a long time, he began to gain popularity when the movie Sleepless in Seattle, which he starred in at the age of 37, became a huge hit. 
>> He struggled for a long while as an unknown actor, but after starring in the critically acclaimed film Sleepless in Seattle at the age of 37, he started to become more popular.
and soon after, he won the Academy Award for Best Actor for his role as a gay man with AIDS in the film Philadelphia.
>> Soon after, he won the Academy Award for Best Actor for his portrayal of a gay man with AIDS in the film Philadelphia.
And he won the Academy Award for Best Actor for the second time for his role in the movie Forrest Gump, where he played the main character who lacks intelligence but grows into an adult and experiences a variety of experiences thanks to his mother's devoted care.
>> He was also awarded the Academy Award for Best Actor for a second time for his performance in the movie Forrest Gump, in which he portrayed the illiterate lead character who matures and encounters a range of situations as a result of his mother's loving care.
I have so many questions about him.
>> I have a ton of questions for him.
When I meet him, I want to ask him how he endured the long life of an unknown actor, and how he was able to play so many roles so realistically, including a gay man with AIDS, a widower in love, and an intellectually disabled child.
>> If I get the chance to meet him, I would like to ask him how he managed to live the lengthy life of an unknown actor and how he was able to play so many different parts so convincingly, such as an intellectually handicapped child, a widower in love, and a gay man with AIDS.
And I would like to ask him what he thinks of his life as an actor.
>> I would also like to know how he feels about his career as an actor.
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