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The most scaring insect

작성자: 박*이
2024-08-16 1474

회원님의 영작문

I told you I had touched the spider whose skin is green. If you read above' you'll find the scariest insect I think is a spider.
The reason why I was scared of the spider
is two. First,the appearance is gross. As you know, the spider has many legs and eyes. But some people raise the spider in the house. I don't understand that. Anyway, the second thing is it's poison.
I think everyone almost knows the spider's poison is so dangerous.Especially fancy spiders are more dangerous like poison mushroom. I don't like a spider and think spider is the scariest insect in the world for these reasons
At last when I touched the spider, do you know how I overcame this situation?
I picked up a bunch of wet tissue and pressure it right away. If this situation comes to you, do like me

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Jun,

Thanks for explaining in detail what happened. Great job! 

-Teacher Ash


I told you I had touched the spider whose skin is green.

>> I told you before that I touched a green spider on my way home. 

 If you read above' you'll find the scariest insect I think is a spider.

>> If you remember, I mentioned that I am scared of spiders. 

The reason why I was scared of the spider is two.

>> There are two reasons why I’m scared of spiders. 

 First,the appearance is gross. 

>> First, the appearance is gross. 

As you know, the spider has many legs and eyes.

>> CORRECT

 But some people raise the spider in the house.

>> However, some people raise spiders as pets. 

 I don't understand that. 

>> CORRECT

OR >> I don't know why.

Anyway, the second thing is it's poison.

>> Anyway, the second reason is its poison. 

I think everyone almost knows the spider's poison is so dangerous.

>> I think everyone knows that spiders poison is lethal. 

Especially fancy spiders are more dangerous like poison mushroom. 

>> Fancy looking spiders are dangerous such as the poison mushroom. 

I don't like a spider and think spider is the scariest insect in the world for these reasons

>> That is why I don’t like spiders, and I think they are the scariest insect in the world. 

At last when I touched the spider, do you know how I overcame this situation?

>> When I touched the spider, I have to think of how to get rid of it. 

I picked up a bunch of wet tissue and pressure it right away.

>> I picked up a bunch of wet tissues and flicked it right away.

 If this situation comes to you, do like me

>> If this situation happens to you, just do what I did.


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