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What do you think of the sound and smell of rain?

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I don't think good at it because the smell is not good but I like the sound of the rain.

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Hi Sunny!
I'm glad you took the time to express yourself today.
This composition is so light.
It's so easy to understand.
You did well in giving the correct words and expressions.
Really good job.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don't think good at it because the smell is not good 
>> I don't think it's good because it doesn't smell good.
 but I like the sound of the rain.
>> However, I like the sound of the rain. 
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