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Where is your hometown? What are some popular places to visit or eat in your hometown?

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My hometown is Gyeongju. It is one of the oldest cities in Korea and was the capital of Shilla for about a thousand years. The Gyeongju Historic Sites District is home to many outstanding Buddhist relics and lifestyle relics from the Shilla period, including sculptures, pagodas, temples, palace sites, royal tombs, and fortresses. In particular, there are many relics from the 7th to 10th centuries, and through these relics, we can see the outstanding artistry unique to Shilla.

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Hello Anna! :)
Thank you for sharing! Gyeongju sounds fascinating with such rich history and culture. I¡¯d love to visit someday and explore those incredible Shilla relics.
~Kelly^^
My hometown is Gyeongju.
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>> I¡¯m from Gyeongju.
It is one of the oldest cities in Korea and was the capital of Shilla for about a thousand years.
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>> It¡¯s one of the oldest cities in Korea and served as the capital of the Shilla Kingdom for around a thousand years.
The Gyeongju Historic Sites District is home to many outstanding Buddhist relics and lifestyle relics from the Shilla period, including sculptures, pagodas, temples, palace sites, royal tombs, and fortresses.
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>> The Gyeongju Historic Sites District houses numerous remarkable Buddhist and lifestyle relics from the Shilla period, such as sculptures, pagodas, temples, palace ruins, royal tombs, and fortresses.
In particular, there are many relics from the 7th to 10th centuries, and through these relics, we can see the outstanding artistry unique to Shilla.
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>> Notably, many relics from the 7th to 10th centuries are present, showcasing the exceptional artistry unique to the Shilla period.
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