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My favorite movie

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My favorite movie I have watched is zomby movie because zomby movie is thrilling and has touching scene among people survived from zombies such as Korean movie called BUSANHANG
I watched BUSANHANG with my family when I was 9 years old. Then the movie is so scary and grossing that I can't watch it. But now I regret I didn't watch it. I must have watched it. It is so funny. I recommend BUSANHANG to people who want extreme thrilling

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Thanks for sharing about your favorite movie. I like the Train to Busan too. It¡¯s one of the best zombie movies I¡¯ve watched. 


-Teacher Ash


My favorite movie I have watched is zomby movie because zomby movie is thrilling and has touching scene among people survived from zombies such as Korean movie called BUSANHANG

>>My favorite movie is ¡°Busanhaeng¡±. It¡¯s a zombie movie that has some touching scenes. 


I watched BUSANHANG with my family when I was 9 years old.

>> I watched ¡°Busanhaeng¡± with my family when I was 9 years old.


 Then the movie is so scary and grossing that I can't watch it. 

>>The movie is so scary and gross that I could not watch it properly. 


But now I regret I didn't watch it.

>>Now, I regret not watching it well. 


 I must have watched it.

>> I think I just watched half of it.  


 It is so funny.

>> It is a fun movie. 


 I recommend BUSANHANG to people who want extreme thrilling

>> I recommend ¡°Busanhaeng¡± to people who want to watch thriller and scary movies.


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