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Many kinds of contemporary music

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In this time, many people take earphones to listen music. And there are many kinds of music. Classic, Hip hop, POP etc. Today we find out of contemporary music. POP is very famous music genre. POP occupy 50% in contemporary music. POP became for USA. And this time, many people like POP. And Rock is very hot music they use electronic guitar, bass, drum. And that make music style like heavy, storng, and hot. And Hip hop is very fast song. It use rap style, and it from USA.

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Hello, Jun!

It was nice to hear from you. ^^

I, myself, love pop music, and it is healing to me. I want to hear about your music taste in the next class.

~ Teacher Trixia


Content:

In this time, many people take earphones to listen music.

- At this time, many people use earphones to listen to music.

And there are many kinds of music. Classic, Hip hop, POP etc.

- There are many kinds of music, like classic, hip-hop, POP, etc.

Today we find out of contemporary music.

- Today we find out about contemporary music.

POP is very famous music genre. POP occupy 50% in contemporary music.

- POP is a very famous music genre, and it occupies 50% of contemporary music.

POP became for USA. And this time, many people like POP.

- POP came from the USA, and this time, many people like it.

And Rock is very hot music they use electronic guitar, bass, drum.

- Next is rock, which is very hot music; they use electronic guitar, bass, and drums.

And that make music style like heavy, storng, and hot.

- That makes the music style heavy, strong, and hot.

And Hip hop is very fast song. It use rap style, and it from USA.

- Also, there is hip-hop, which is a very fast song. 

It use rap style, and it from USA.

- It uses rap styles and is from the USA.

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