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Would you rather have the perfect body or be super intelligent?

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If possible, I want to have perfect body and super intelligent. In reality I have bad body and ordinary intelligence. But I am satisfied with my body and intelligence. If l had perfect body, I don't know afraid and l had a lot of conceit. Because l have bad body, l try to be a healthy person, take care my body. If I had super intelligence, I would try to gain without pains. What you get easily disappears easily. I like me who to try everyday. I like ordinary me.

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Hi Eva,

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the question of having a perfect body or super intelligence. It¡¯s wonderful that you appreciate yourself as you are and recognize the value in trying every day to be healthy and improve. Your perspective on not taking things for granted is really inspiring. Your writing is improving! Keep up the great work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

If possible, I want to have perfect body and super intelligent.

>>If possible, I would like to have both a perfect body and be super intelligent.

In reality I have bad body and ordinary intelligence. But I am satisfied with my body and intelligence.

>>In reality, I have a bad body and ordinary intelligence, but I am satisfied with my body and intelligence.

If l had perfect body, I don't know afraid and l had a lot of conceit.

>>If I had the perfect body, I wouldn't be afraid, and I might become conceited.

Because l have bad body, l try to be a healthy person, take care my body.

>>Because I have a bad body, I try to be a healthy person and take care of my body.

If I had super intelligence, I would try to gain without pains.

>>If I had super intelligence, I would try to gain things without effort.

What you get easily disappears easily.

>>CORRECT

OR>>What you get easily will disappear easily.

I like me who to try everyday.

>>I like myself for trying every day.

I like ordinary me.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I like the ordinary version of myself.

 

 

 

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