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If you could create your own street food, what would it be?

작성자: 박*호
2024-08-12 168

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I'm not very good at cooking, so I've never thought about making street food.
Recently, I occasionally cook food for my children at home, but since I don't have my own recipes, I mainly watch cooking videos on YouTube and cook accordingly.
In the summer, I usually ride my bike and stop by stalls along the river, so if I were to make street food, I would like ro make something cool and thirst-quenching.
I used to mainly drink Coke and eat instant ramen and hot dogs at the street stall.
If I were to run a stall, I would like to make and serve sikhye, a traditional Korean drink.
Therefore, I will learn how to make sikhye from my mother and make it. Also, I would like to ask my mother and learn and make other refreshing traditional Korean foods.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Monday, Sun! 

Thank you so much for doing your homework today. See you tomorrow in class! 

- Kristine ^^ 

I'm not very good at cooking, so I've never thought about making street food.
>> Correct.
Recently, I occasionally cook food for my children at home, but since I don't have my own recipes,
>> I've been feeding the children at home on occasion lately, but I don't have any original recipes. 
I mainly watch cooking videos on YouTube and cook accordingly.
>> I mostly use YouTube to watch cooking tutorials and adapt my cooking.
In the summer, I usually ride my bike and stop by stalls along the river, 
>> I typically ride my bike and visit the stalls along the river in the summer.
so if I were to make street food, I would like ro make something cool and thirst-quenching.
>> So if I were to create street food, I would rather make something refreshing and hydrating.
I used to mainly drink Coke and eat instant ramen and hot dogs at the street stall.
>> I used to eat hot dogs and instant ramen at the street stand and mostly drink Coke.
If I were to run a stall, I would like to make and serve sikhye, a traditional Korean drink.
>> Sikhye is a traditional Korean drink that I would like to make and serve if I were the owner of a stall.
Therefore, I will learn how to make sikhye from my mother and make it. 
>> Therefore I'm going to take my mother's cooking lessons and prepare sikhye.
Also, I would like to ask my mother and learn and make other refreshing traditional Korean foods.
>> In addition, I would like to ask my mother, study, and prepare more refreshing traditional Korean dishes.
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