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Certainly I would not lend or ask for money to my friend. Because when money gets involved between the relationship, it will provide disagreement and doubts between the two. Money should never be shared with someone you trust.

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Hello, Paul!
I agree with what you wrote here. Keep up the good work!
~Teacher Selene


Certainly I would not lend or ask for money to my friend.
>>I would certainly not lend or ask for money to my friend. 
Because when money gets involved between the relationship, it will provide disagreement and doubts between the two.
>>CORRECT
Money should never be shared with someone you trust.
>>CORRECT
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