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Writing task: Are tattoos common and acceptable in Korea? Why or why not?

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2024-08-06 659

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Getting a tattoo is common, and small tattoos are general.
But big tattoos are uncommon.
Many people don't like to see big tattoos on the body.
In addition, it is illegal for a person who is not a doctor to give a tattoo.
However, most of these actions occur illegally.
I wanted to get a tattoo on my eyeline 4 years ago.
However, when I heard about the side effects, I gave up the idea.

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Hi, MK!
I heard and read that in Korea, only doctors are allowed to do tattoos. It was very interesting because in my country, as long as someone knows how, they can do it as a business. I also agree that now people use tattoos for aesthetic purposes.
- T. Caitlyn
Getting a tattoo is common, and small tattoos are general.
>> Getting a tattoo is common, and small tattoos are popular.
But big tattoos are uncommon.
>> CORRECT
Many people don't like to see big tattoos on the body.
>> CORRECT
In addition, it is illegal for a person who is not a doctor to give a tattoo.
>> CORRECT
However, most of these actions occur illegally.
>> CORRECT
I wanted to get a tattoo on my eyeline 4 years ago.
>> CORRECT
However, when I heard about the side effects, I gave up the idea.
>> CORRECT
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