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HOMEWORK

1. He did not need to hear your opinion. (need, needed)
2. You will need a babysitter for the party tonight. (needed, will need)
3. She needs to stay close so that she
won¡¯t get lost. (need, needs)
4. Farmers need to have supplies of
seed and fertilizer. (need, needs)
5. She need time to think about her
decision. (needed, need

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Hi, Ms. Nami! It's almost perfect except for the last item. It should be in past tense because SHE NEED would be incorrect. It should be "She needs". Let us practice more next time. See you!
--Teacher Anji


1. He did not need to hear your opinion. (need, needed)
>> CORRECT
2. You will need a babysitter for the party tonight. (needed, will need)
>> CORRECT
3. She needs to stay close so that she
won¡¯t get lost. (need, needs)
>> CORRECT
4. Farmers need to have supplies of
seed and fertilizer. (need, needs)
>> CORRECT
5. She need time to think about her
decision. (needed, need
>> She needed time to think about her decision.



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