무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Do you enjoy making snacks at home, or do you prefer buying them from the store? What snacks do you

작성자: 박*호
2024-08-05 275

회원님의 영작문

When I was in school, my mother used to make rice cakes and Korean traditional cookies for me.
However, these days, most Koreans buy snacks from stores and eat them.
In my case, I have experience making snacks for my children when they were young. Children tend to prefer snacks made by their parents rather than store-bought snacks.
When my children were young, I made them so-called “rice cake skewers.”
How to make it is very simple.
It is made by putting rice cakes fried in oil on a skewer. In addition to rice cakes, fruits such as strawberries are also added, and sometimes seafood is added.
I have a fond memory of my youngest daughter enjoying the “rice cake skewers” ​​I made.
Since the heat wave continues these days, I sometimes make refreshing fruit salads.
I put finely chopped fruits such as watermelon and strawberries in a large bowl, add milk, ice, and a little sugar to create a refreshing and sweet fruit salad.
It's very easy to make, so I can do it or my daughterts can do it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Sun! 

Thank you so much for doing your homework! See you tomorrow~ 

- Kristine ^^ 

When I was in school, my mother used to make rice cakes and Korean traditional cookies for me.
>> Correct. 
However, these days, most Koreans buy snacks from stores and eat them.
>> However these days, most of Koreans purchase and consume snacks from stores.
In my case, I have experience making snacks for my children when they were young. 
>> Correct. 
Children tend to prefer snacks made by their parents rather than store-bought snacks.
>> Children typically make their own snacks rather than purchasing premade ones from the shop.
When my children were young, I made them so-called “rice cake skewers.”
>> Correct. 
How to make it is very simple.
>> It is quite easy to make.
It is made by putting rice cakes fried in oil on a skewer. 
>> Correct. 
In addition to rice cakes, fruits such as strawberries are also added, and sometimes seafood is added.
>> Together with rice cakes, other ingredients may include fruits like strawberries and at times fish.
I have a fond memory of my youngest daughter enjoying the “rice cake skewers” ​​I made.
>> I have a fond memory of my youngest daughter enjoying the rice cake skewers I made.
Since the heat wave continues these days, I sometimes make refreshing fruit salads.
>> I occasionally make cool fruit salads because the heat wave is still quite strong these days.
I put finely chopped fruits such as watermelon and strawberries in a large bowl, add milk, ice, and a little sugar to create a refreshing and sweet fruit salad.
>> I put finely chopped fruits such as watermelon and strawberries in a large bowl and added milk, ice, and a little sugar to create a refreshing and sweet fruit salad.
It's very easy to make, so I can do it or my daughterts can do it.
>> It's very easy to make, so I can do it or my daughters can do it.
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
137923 What sport would you want to try or learn? Explain your answer. 차*혁 완료 2024-06-18 228
137922 What do you think is the most fun musical instrument to play?... 차*진 완료 2024-06-18 214
137921 What are some of the reasons people choose to adopt? 김*경 완료 2024-06-18 289
137920 What do you think is interesting about your culture? 김*환 완료 2024-06-18 202
137919 Are you good at time management or managing your time? Explain... 오*혁 완료 2024-06-18 0
137918 Homework 김*숙 완료 2024-06-18 280
137917 What are some tourist attractions in your city? 박*은 완료 2024-06-18 278
137916 Q) Can sadness be useful in people’s lives? 최*영 완료 2024-06-18 2
137915 2024.06.17 남*례 완료 2024-06-18 267
137914 Homework 류*우 완료 2024-06-18 204
137913 I become morning person. 이*희 완료 2024-06-18 8
137912 In some countries the government promotes public transport as... 황*하 완료 2024-06-18 286
137911 May 17th homework 안*희 완료 2024-06-18 293
137910 Some people think that people shouldn\'t wear animal furs. Do... 박*호 완료 2024-06-18 293
137909 My life 5 years from now 한*자 완료 2024-06-18 9
137908 Vices 이*규 완료 2024-06-18 417
137907 joke 민*정 완료 2024-06-18 1
137906 Homework 권*미 완료 2024-06-18 0
137905 The nutrients in dairy foods improve the body’s ability to burn... 안*윤 완료 2024-06-18 236
137904 homework 권*미 완료 2024-06-18 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]