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Describe your hometown

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I 've been living Daegu for 45 years, Daegu is the lagest city in Korea.My hometown is famous for heat in summer.
it's often the highest temperture in korea but there are no natural disaster .I think Daegu is nice to live in

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Hello, Ju Mi! Thank you for sharing things about your hometown. I appreciate your time and effort doing your homework. Have a fun Monday! ^^
~T. Jewel
I 've been living Daegu for 45 years,
>>I've been living in Daegu for 45 years.
Daegu is the lagest city in Korea
>>Daegu is one of the largest cities in Korea.
My hometown is famous for heat in summer.
>>My hometown is famous for its heat in the summer.
it's often the highest temperture in korea but there are no natural disaster .
>>It often experiences the highest temperatures in Korea, but there are no natural disasters.
I think Daegu is nice to live in.
>>I think Daegu is a nice place to live.
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