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What are some popular American food trends or dishes that you’ve noticed in recent years? How do the

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I haven't been to the United States recently, so I don't know much about American food trends or food culture.
So, I searched for related information online and would like to share the results.
First, more and more Americans are eating plant-based foods, such as vegetable burgers and dairy-free milk.
This shows growing interest in health, environment and animal welfare.
Next, foods from other countries, such as Korean BBQ and Mexican street tacos, are gaining popularity. This means that America is a melting pot of cultures, a nation of immigrants, and Americans trying new and different flavors.
Additionally, demand for high-quality foods such as craft beer and artisan cheese is increasing. This is proof that Americans prefer high-quality food.
In conclusion, it can be said that American food culture is diverse, focuses on health, and is constantly evolving by embracing food cultures from around the world.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, Sun! 

Food is an essential part of every culture. It's more than just a means of sustenance, but a way of expressing oneself, connecting with others, and passing on rich cultural heritage. Food is deeply ingrained in our cultural identity and serves as a representation of our heritage, history, and values.

- Kristine ^^ 

I haven't been to the United States recently, so I don't know much about American food trends or food culture.
>> Correct. 
So, I searched for related information online and would like to share the results.
>> Correct. 
First, more and more Americans are eating plant-based foods, such as vegetable burgers and dairy-free milk.
>> Firstly, a growing number of Americans are consuming plant-based meals like veggie burgers and milk without dairy.
This shows growing interest in health, environment and animal welfare.
>> This shows growing interest in health, the environment, and animal welfare.
Next, foods from other countries, such as Korean BBQ and Mexican street tacos, are gaining popularity.
>> Secondly, international cuisine is becoming increasingly popular. This includes Mexican street tacos and Korean BBQ.
This means that America is a melting pot of cultures, a nation of immigrants, and Americans trying new and different flavors.
>> This indicates that America is a country of immigrants, a melting pot of cultures, and a place where people like trying out new cuisines.
Additionally, demand for high-quality foods such as craft beer and artisan cheese is increasing. 
>> Furthermore, there is a growing market for premium items like artisan cheese and beer.
This is proof that Americans prefer high-quality food.
>> This reflects the preference for fine cuisine among Americans.
In conclusion, it can be said that American food culture is diverse, focuses on health, and is constantly evolving by embracing food cultures from around the world.
>> In conclusion, it can be claimed that American cuisine is varied, health-conscious, and always changing due to its acceptance of international cuisines.
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