무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

What are some popular American food trends or dishes that you’ve noticed in recent years? How do the

작성자: 박*호
2024-08-02 354

회원님의 영작문

I haven't been to the United States recently, so I don't know much about American food trends or food culture.
So, I searched for related information online and would like to share the results.
First, more and more Americans are eating plant-based foods, such as vegetable burgers and dairy-free milk.
This shows growing interest in health, environment and animal welfare.
Next, foods from other countries, such as Korean BBQ and Mexican street tacos, are gaining popularity. This means that America is a melting pot of cultures, a nation of immigrants, and Americans trying new and different flavors.
Additionally, demand for high-quality foods such as craft beer and artisan cheese is increasing. This is proof that Americans prefer high-quality food.
In conclusion, it can be said that American food culture is diverse, focuses on health, and is constantly evolving by embracing food cultures from around the world.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, Sun! 

Food is an essential part of every culture. It's more than just a means of sustenance, but a way of expressing oneself, connecting with others, and passing on rich cultural heritage. Food is deeply ingrained in our cultural identity and serves as a representation of our heritage, history, and values.

- Kristine ^^ 

I haven't been to the United States recently, so I don't know much about American food trends or food culture.
>> Correct. 
So, I searched for related information online and would like to share the results.
>> Correct. 
First, more and more Americans are eating plant-based foods, such as vegetable burgers and dairy-free milk.
>> Firstly, a growing number of Americans are consuming plant-based meals like veggie burgers and milk without dairy.
This shows growing interest in health, environment and animal welfare.
>> This shows growing interest in health, the environment, and animal welfare.
Next, foods from other countries, such as Korean BBQ and Mexican street tacos, are gaining popularity.
>> Secondly, international cuisine is becoming increasingly popular. This includes Mexican street tacos and Korean BBQ.
This means that America is a melting pot of cultures, a nation of immigrants, and Americans trying new and different flavors.
>> This indicates that America is a country of immigrants, a melting pot of cultures, and a place where people like trying out new cuisines.
Additionally, demand for high-quality foods such as craft beer and artisan cheese is increasing. 
>> Furthermore, there is a growing market for premium items like artisan cheese and beer.
This is proof that Americans prefer high-quality food.
>> This reflects the preference for fine cuisine among Americans.
In conclusion, it can be said that American food culture is diverse, focuses on health, and is constantly evolving by embracing food cultures from around the world.
>> In conclusion, it can be claimed that American cuisine is varied, health-conscious, and always changing due to its acceptance of international cuisines.
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
136010 HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \"What are the... 앨* 완료 2024-04-01 0
136009 What is the most important in studying English: speaking,... 박*은 완료 2024-04-01 132
136008 >> What are your thoughts on the trainee system of idols in your... 이*민 완료 2024-04-01 1
136007 What do you like best about your sibling? 박*현 완료 2024-04-01 183
136006 What are some examples of healthy snacks that you enjoy? 김*아 완료 2024-04-01 125
136005 Mar 27th\'s homework 안*희 완료 2024-04-01 247
136004 What is the importance of voting in an election? 이*윤 완료 2024-04-01 76
136003 Homework 윤*선 완료 2024-04-01 141
136002 Homework 류*우 완료 2024-04-01 308
136001 The most difficult part of learning English for me is.. 김*현 완료 2024-04-01 5
136000 Homework 권*윤 완료 2024-04-01 2
135999 How has your country\'s dining culture changed over the past few... 박*호 완료 2024-04-01 227
135998 WRITING TASK: Can technology or devices assist in managing... 임*지 완료 2024-04-01 7
135997 homework 이*수 완료 2024-04-01 274
135996 HOMEWORK: Write a composition about your favorite activity with... 이*은 완료 2024-04-01 129
135995 test6 Te*002 완료 2024-04-01 581
135994 test5 Te*002 완료 2024-04-01 453
135993 test4 Te*002 완료 2024-04-01 142
135992 test3 Te*002 완료 2024-04-01 164
135991 Specific challenge that taught me a valuable lesson 오*솜 완료 2024-04-01 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]