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How well do you work with people?

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Communication with people is an important source in the work. Most people communicate with someone every time, every moment include me. Sometimes I have hard problems at work. I could try to discuss that with colleges. It made problems easier to solve than ever. It has improved my social skills.
And it made understand us other values and cultural things.

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Hello, Iris!
That's teamwork! Even professionals who work alone have to communicate well with others. It really is significant. 
~ Trixia

Content:
Communication with people is an important source in the work.
- Communication with people is an important source at work.
Most people communicate with someone every time, every moment include me.
- Most people communicate with someone every time and every moment, including me.
Sometimes I have hard problems at work.
- Sometimes I have arduous problems at work.
I could try to discuss that with colleges.
- I could try to discuss that with colleagues.
It made problems easier to solve than ever.
- CORRECT.
It has improved my social skills.
- CORRECT. 
And it made understand us other values and cultural things.
- And it made us understand other values and cultural things.
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