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Do you think men enjoy sports more than women?

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I don't explain exctly. Because It depend on a person. If person love the soccor or baseball etc, that person also love the sports. It's not important to the gender.
I think important thing is enjoying sports is very varioused for each people. Because some people like to play the sports and other people like to watching play the sports and the other people just like star player in sports like Son Heung-min in club Tottenham Hotspur.
So, I don't like playing the soccor. but I like watching play the soccor. It's mean I enjoy sports.

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Hey Steve! Thank you for taking time to do the homework and sharing your thoughts about today's question. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


So, I don't like playing the soccor. but I like watching play the soccor. 
>> For example, I don't like playing soccer, but I enjoy watching it.  

It's mean I enjoy sports.
>> This means I enjoy sports in my own way.
I don't explain exctly. Because It depend on a person.
>> I can't give an exact explanation because it depends on the individual.

If person love the soccor or baseball etc, that person also love the sports. It's not important to the gender.
>> If someone loves soccer or baseball, they will naturally love sports, regardless of their gender. 

I think important thing is enjoying sports is very varioused for each people.
>> The important thing is that the way people enjoy sports varies greatly. 

Because some people like to play the sports and other people like to watching play the sports and the other people just like star player in sports like Son Heung-min in club Tottenham Hotspur.

>>Some people like to play sports, others enjoy watching sports, and some admire star players like Son Heung-min from Tottenham Hotspur.  
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