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Yearly plan

작성자: 임*준
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회원님의 영작문

What goal do you want to achieve this year?

>>> At first, I want to enhance my English speaking skill. From next year, I have to work and study in graduate school by reading English paper and discussing with co-workers in English. Therefore, I want to raise my ablity as much as possible.

Secondly, I want to spend much time doing special with my gf and family because from next year I might not have enough time with them. As my senior said, first 2 years in gratduate shool is very busy so that I can study, work, do project and write my paper in limited time. To guarantee our promise that I will give much money to them when I succeed, I can't help studying hard.

Thirdly, I want to read more books. Althought I like reading a book, honestly I like playing games or watching on the phone that reading because it is more funny! But I think, to enhance my reading skill and writing skill, I have to read more books. From next year, I must read many papers and write my paper!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Jun!~
I hope you successfully achieve all of these goals ^__^
Chammy

At first, I want to enhance my English speaking skill. 
>>At first, I want to enhance my English speaking skills. 
From next year, I have to work and study in graduate school by reading English paper and discussing with co-workers in English.
>>Starting next year, I will have to work and study in graduate school, reading English papers and conversing with coworkers in English.
 Therefore, I want to raise my ablity as much as possible.
>>  Therefore, I want to raise my ability as much as possible.
OR
>>Thus, I wish to increase my skill set to the greatest extent possible.
Secondly, I want to spend much time doing special with my gf and family because from next year I might not have enough time with them.
>>Secondly, I want to spend a lot of time doing something special with my gf and family because from next year I might not have enough time to spend with them.
 As my senior said, first 2 years in gratduate shool is very busy so that I can study, work, do project and write my paper in limited time.
>>As my senior said, the first 2 years in graduate school are very busy so I can study, work, do projects, and write my paper in a limited time.
 To guarantee our promise that I will give much money to them when I succeed, I can't help studying hard.
>>  To guarantee our promise that I will give them money when I succeed, I can't help studying hard.
Thirdly, I want to read more books. Althought I like reading a book, honestly I like playing games or watching on the phone that reading because it is more funny! 
>> Thirdly, I want to read more books. Although I like reading a book, honestly I like playing games or watching on the phone rather than reading because it is more fun! 
But I think, to enhance my reading skill and writing skill, I have to read more books. From next year, I must read many papers and write my paper!
>>But I think, to enhance my reading and writing skills, I have to read more books. From next year, I must read many papers and write one!
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