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Explain the saying \"Time is Gold.\"

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¡°Time is Gold.¡± is true. Because, We are getting more better person to spend the time. We can choose save the time ourselves. We also, can choose the grown up ourselves like study, practice, polish up etc. The saving the many time person is more better person than not saving the time person.
Time is gold. So, If you can control the saving the time, you can grown up the better person. Someday, you will give a good influence for people who need your help. That is reason I think ¡°Time is Gold.¡±

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Hey Steve! You have truly outdone yourself! You said you couldn't do it but here you are sharing your opinion about each and every homework I give you. Keep on going!^^
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Time is gold. So, If you can control the saving the time, you can grown up the better person.
>> Since time is so valuable, mastering the art of time management helps us grow into better individuals. 

Someday, you will give a good influence for people who need your help.
>> Eventually, this can enable us to positively influence others and offer help to those in need.

That is reason I think ¡°Time is Gold.¡±
>> That¡¯s why I believe ¡°Time is gold.¡±
¡°Time is Gold.¡± is true.
>> CORRECT
OR >>"Time is gold" is accurate.
 


Because, We are getting more better person to spend the time. 
We can choose save the time ourselves.
>>  As we become better individuals by managing our time wisely, we have the ability to choose how to spend it.

We also, can choose the grown up ourselves like study, practice, polish up etc.
>>We can decide to invest our time in activities like studying, practicing, and improving ourselves.

The saving the many time person is more better person than not saving the time person.
>>
People who effectively manage their time are often more successful and fulfilled compared to those who do not.

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