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Describe a moment when you had an argument or disagreement with a friend.

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회원님의 영작문

I have a friend who named Joo-Hyun. She and I have been friends for 17 years. She is my best friend!
Even though we have spent a lot of time together, we have totally different personalities and we are completely different especially in terms of the way we spent money. She is a super frugal person. She never spent money on what she doesn't think it is necessary even when she goes to a trip with friends!
However I would like to spend money for valuable time if it's not too much. I think I can never buy happy and memorable momnets by money. I think spending meaningful time is more important than saving money.
So when she and I go to a trip together, we always have a little trouble or argument about how much we would spend on each meal!
She always blames me for ordering too many menus. :(
I respect her but sometimes it is hard to understand her.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yura! You're friend reminds me of someone, too! This could be a difficult situation to deal with but they are our friends and we try to understand them the best way we can. Thank you for taking time doing your homework. Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
I have a friend who named Joo-Hyun.
>>I have a friend named Joo-Hyun
She and I have been friends for 17 years.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>We have been friends for 17 years.
She is my best friend!
>>CORRECT
Even though we have spent a lot of time together, we have totally different personalities and we are completely different especially in terms of the way we spent money.
>>Even though we have spent a lot of time together, we have totally different personalities, especially in terms of how we spend money.
She is a super frugal person.
>>CORRECT
She never spent money on what she doesn't think it is necessary even when she goes to a trip with friends!
>>She never spends money on things she doesn't consider necessary, even when she travels with friends!
However I would like to spend money for valuable time if it's not too much.
>>However, I like to spend money on valuable experiences, if it's not too much.
I think I can never buy happy and memorable momnets by money.
>>I believe that happy and memorable moments cannot be bought with money alone.
I think spending meaningful time is more important than saving money.
>>Spending meaningful time is more important to me than saving money.
So when she and I go to a trip together, we always have a little trouble or argument about how much we would spend on each meal!
>>So when she and I go on a trip together, we often have a little trouble or arguments about how much to spend on each meal!
She always blames me for ordering too many menus. :(
>>She always blames me for ordering too many dishes. :(
I respect her but sometimes it is hard to understand her.
>>I respect her, but sometimes it's hard for me to understand her.
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