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My favorite hobby is smartphone because smartphone is funny

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Hi Keon Min,

Great job on your homework! It's interesting to hear that your favorite hobby is using your smartphone. Smartphones can be really fun with all the games, apps, and videos available. Keep enjoying your time and exploring new things on your smartphone!

~Teacher Cathy

 

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