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Is fishing a relaxing activity for you? Why or why not?

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Fishing is known to be the best activity to relax from the hustle and bustle of everyday life.
And fishing is known to be good for relieving stress.
In fact, many people around me, including my brother, enjoy fishing in quiet suburban areas in the evenings after work or on weekends.
I also went fishing with them a few times.
But fishing doesn't seem to suit my personality.
I was very bored while fishing with them.
I don't really like waiting that long.
However, when I go fishing, I have to throw the fishing rod into the water and wait endlessly for the fish to bite.
I think fishing can be kind of a waste of time.
Instead, I relieve stress by engaging in sweaty sports like golf.
However, I respect the tastes of people who enjoy fishing.

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Happy Hump Day, Sun! 

The act of fishing promotes mental health and physical well-being, serving as a form of relaxation and stress relief. It's a compelling answer to why people like fishing, offering a serene escape from the hustle and bustle of daily life.

- Kristine ^^ 

Fishing is known to be the best activity to relax from the hustle and bustle of everyday life.
>> It's well known that fishing is the perfect pastime to unwind from the stress of daily life.
And fishing is known to be good for relieving stress.
>> It's widely known that fishing relieves stress.
In fact, many people around me, including my brother, enjoy fishing in quiet suburban areas in the evenings after work or on weekends.
>> In fact, my brother and others in the area around me like going fishing on the weekends or in the peaceful suburban evenings after work.
I also went fishing with them a few times.
>> Correct.
But fishing doesn't seem to suit my personality.
>> However, I don't think fishing fits with my personality.
I was very bored while fishing with them.
>> Correct.
I don't really like waiting that long.
>> Correct.
However, when I go fishing, I have to throw the fishing rod into the water and wait endlessly for the fish to bite.
>> However every time I go fishing, I have to cast the line into the water and hope that the fish will bite.
I think fishing can be kind of a waste of time.
>> I consider fishing to be somewhat a waste of time.
Instead, I relieve stress by engaging in sweaty sports like golf.
>> Instead, I play perspiring activities like golf to relieve stress.
However, I respect the tastes of people who enjoy fishing.
>> Correct.
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