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In Georgia, I was concerned about unleashed big dogs. But they were not threatening or not barking. They were very friendly and indifferent to people. However they pooped anywhere, so we had to be careful in walking on the road. After all I stepped on a dog poop while walking. I hated.

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Hi, Gi Yean! 
I totally understand how you feel, especially when you mentioned the kind of dogs that are roaming in Georgia. It can be scary, especially for people who are not used to dogs, and also unsanitary because of their poop.
- T. Caitlyn
In Georgia, I was concerned about unleashed big dogs. 
>> CORRECT
But they were not threatening or not barking. 
>> But they were neither threatening nor barking.
They were very friendly and indifferent to people. 
>> CORRECT
However they pooped anywhere, so we had to be careful in walking on the road. 
>> However, they pooped anywhere, so we had to be careful while walking on the road.
After all I stepped on a dog poop while walking. 
>> Eventually, I stepped on dog poop while walking.
I hated.
>> I hated that.
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