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1. HOW DO YOU MAKE GREAT FRIED CHICKEN?
First, you should wash the chicken.
Then you should put oil in the pot.
You should also cut the chicken before put in the pot.
The chicken should be great fired chicken

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Hi, Ms. Nami! Thank you for the great sentences. I could tell that you don't fried chicken just like me :-) Let us practice making sentences again soon. See you!
--Teacher Anji




First, you should wash the chicken.
>> CORRECT
Then, you should put oil in the pot.
>> CORRECT
You should also cut the chicken before put in the pot.
>> You should also cut the chicken before putting in the pot.
The chicken should be great fired chicken
>> The chicken should be great.
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