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1. What season do you like most? and why?
2. What season do you hate? why?

1. My favorite season late fall. Because the mountain is colorful and the weather is cool. last the air is clear
2. I hate the most season is late spring. Because the yellow dust, allergies and the weather is hot.

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Yeong Min, 
We all have our favorite season. The Philippines has two seasons only: wet and dry. However, I am glad that in the city I am living in, cool weather is also experienced and I get to admire this regardless of the time of the year.
Have a great day!
Aki~

1. My favorite season late fall. Because the mountain is colorful and the weather is cool. last the air is clear
>>> The late fall is my favorite season because of the colorful mountains and the coolness of the weather. You can also add the air is clear which made me like the fall season.

2. I hate the most season is late spring. Because the yellow dust, allergies and the weather is hot.
>>> I hate the late spring because of the yellow dust that triggers allergies in most people and it is already the start of hot weather.
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