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How has vacationing with your family changed over the years?

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n my case the holidays don't change. I have been spending the holidays with my family since four years ago.

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Hello Anna!^^
Thank you for sharing! It's great to hear that you have been able to consistently spend the holidays with your family for the past four years. Maintaining traditions and family time is really important and meaningful.
~Kelly^^
n my case the holidays don't change.
>> In my case, the holidays don't change.
I have been spending the holidays with my family since four years ago.
>> I have been spending the holidays with my family for the past four years.
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