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HOMEWORK:
ESSAY: Talk about those famous foods you have tried in Busan and attach some photos with it.

I think Busan's specialties are 'Dumpling', 'Hotteok', and 'Odari'.
"Dumpling" is not an ordinary dumpling but a lightly pressed dumpling that is one of the foods in Busan that is famous for its chewy and crispy texture with only glass noodles in it. Especially, it is really delicious with sliced cabbage sprinkled with spicy sauce.
Hotteok is a type of bread that is fried in oil, unlike bread that is typically baked. It has nuts, rice cakes, and sugar inside, giving it a chewy texture and sweet taste.
'Odari' is a grilled squid leg on an iron plate. It is a really savory and delicious food because it is baked with butter.

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Mr. Lee!
I am impressed with how you presented your homework today. Thank you for sharing these pictures, especially the "Odari"
Enjoy! Could it be the reason why you are absent today  because you are in Busan,
T. Aki~

I think Busan's specialties are 'Dumpling', 'Hotteok', and 'Odari'.
>>> CORRECT!

"Dumpling" is not an ordinary dumpling but a lightly pressed dumpling that is one of the foods in Busan that is famous for its chewy and crispy texture with only glass noodles in it. Especially, it is really delicious with sliced cabbage sprinkled with spicy sauce.
>>> CORRECT!

Hotteok is a type of bread that is fried in oil, unlike bread that is typically baked. It has nuts, rice cakes, and sugar inside, giving it a chewy texture and sweet taste.
>>> CORRECT!

'Odari' is a grilled squid leg on an iron plate. It is a really savory and delicious food because it is baked with butter.
>>> CORRECT!
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