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How do you feel about turbulence during a flight?

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One of the things I worry about most when traveling by plane is turbulence.
I actually encountered turbulence when I was flying to Indonesia with three friends in December 2017.
To go from Korea to Indonesia, I have to cross the equator.
It is known that a lot of turbulence is generally encountered when crossing the equator.
The turbulence I encountered during my flight in December 2017 was really severe.
The turbulence caused the plane to shake and eventually descend vertically for more than 50 meters.
Fortunately, my friends and I were not hurt, but at that moment, I remembered a movie about a plane crashing and was terrified.
I never want to encounter turbulence in flight again.

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Happy Friday, Sun! 

Most incidents of planes hitting bumpy air are minor, however, and airlines have made steady improvements to reduce accident rates from turbulence over time. Experts advise air travelers to stay vigilant, stressing the importance of wearing a seat belt whenever possible as a first line of protection.

- Kristine ^^ 

One of the things I worry about most when traveling by plane is turbulence.
>> Turbulence is one of the things I worry about the most when flying.
I actually encountered turbulence when I was flying to Indonesia with three friends in December 2017.
>> Correct.
To go from Korea to Indonesia, I have to cross the equator.
>> I have to cross the equator in order to get from Korea to Indonesia.
It is known that a lot of turbulence is generally encountered when crossing the equator.
>> It is well known that traveling across the equator typically causes a great deal of turbulence.
The turbulence I encountered during my flight in December 2017 was really severe.
>> I had quite strong turbulence during my trip in December 2017.
The turbulence caused the plane to shake and eventually descend vertically for more than 50 meters.
>> The plane began to tremble due to the turbulence, and it eventually fell vertically for around fifty meters.
Fortunately, my friends and I were not hurt, but at that moment, I remembered a movie about a plane crashing and was terrified.
>> Luckily, none of my friends or I got hurt, but I was scared because I was reminded of a movie about a plane going down.
I never want to encounter turbulence in flight again.
>> I would never want to experience turbulence in the air again.
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