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When I watch American dramas. People in the United States use fork and knife tools when eating.
Koreans sometimes eat food with their hands, but it seems not clean
This is very important etiquette. Using tools without eating with your hands It looks so clean What's more surprising is that in Korea, if there is a food you want to eat, you reach out and take it. This makes the person next to you uncomfortable. But in the U.S., they ask you to hand them what you want to eat. I really envy the U.S.

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                          Apart from Korea, which country do you think has the best food culture?


When I watch American dramas. People in the United States use fork and knife tools when eating.
>> When I watch American dramas, I see people in the United States use cutlery, such as knives and forks when eating. 

Koreans sometimes eat food with their hands, but it seems not clean
>> Koreans sometimes eat food with their hands, but it seems that it's not clean

This is very important etiquette. 
>> This is a very important table etiquette. 

Using tools without eating with your hands It looks so clean 
>> Using tableware and not eating with your hands look much cleaner.  

What's more surprising is that in Korea, if there is a food you want to eat, you reach out and take it. 
>> OR: What's more surprising is that Koreans just reach out and take the food they want when they eat. 

This makes the person next to you uncomfortable. 
>> This makes the person next to them uncomfortable. 

But in the U.S., they ask you to hand them what you want to eat. 
>> OR: But in the U.S., they ask you to pass to them what they want to eat. 

I really envy the U.S.
>> I envy the American table etiquette very much. 

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