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Why people should better face problems in life?

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I think we can feel positive feelings well only if we have negative feelings. If we don't face any problem then I believe we would not be happy at all. Also, we can get positive feelings directly from problems too. By solving difficult problems, we can get confidence for ourselves.
We can grow through problems. We can learn how to manage our mind during hard times. Also, we will get some know-how about solving problems.

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Hello there, Seong Eun!~
You were right happiness shines when we encounter problems or downfall. And we appreciate it the most after negative circumstances that we're able to overcome ^^
Chammy

I think we can feel positive feelings well only if we have negative feelings. 
>>Correct
If we don't face any problem then I believe we would not be happy at all.
>>  If we don't face any problems then I believe we will not be happy anymore.
Also, we can get positive feelings directly from problems too. 
By solving difficult problems, we can get confidence for ourselves.
>> By solving difficult problems, we can gain confidence in ourselves.
We can grow through problems. 
>>Correct
We can learn how to manage our mind during hard times. 
>> We can learn how to manage our minds during hard times. 
Also, we will get some know-how about solving problems.
>>Correct
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