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Have you ever had an interesting or memorable experience while riding the bus?

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I have a beautiful memory from 30 years ago when I commuted to work by bus.
At that time, I took the bus from a residential area on the border of Seoul to my office in downtown Seoul every morning around 7 am.
Meanwhile, I met a beautiful woman who took the same bus at the same bus stop at the same time every day.
She even worked at a securities firm near my office.
I was happy and excited to see her every morning.
But I wasn't brave enough to tell her.
Then, about two months later, I finally mustered up the courage to talk to her.
She said that she had been actually curious about me when she saw me at the bus stop every morning.
And we became friends who sometimes ate out and went out to play in the countryside.
But unfortunately, we couldn't progress into a romantic relationship and broke up.
I sometimes think back to those days and wonder where she is and what she is doing now.
And I wish her to live happily ever after.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Hump Day, Sun! 

Going from one place to another by bus has personal, environmental, and societal benefits. Did you know just walking to and from the bus stop can provide the recommended 30 minutes of exercise each day? Being active helps with physical health, and taking transit instead of driving reduces stress.

- Kristine ^^

I have a beautiful memory from 30 years ago when I commuted to work by bus.
>> I had a lovely memory of taking the bus to work thirty years ago.
At that time, I took the bus from a residential area on the border of Seoul to my office in downtown Seoul every morning around 7 am.
>> I used to commute by bus every morning at around seven in the morning from a residential neighborhood in Seoul to my office.
Meanwhile, I met a beautiful woman who took the same bus at the same bus stop at the same time every day.
>> From that monent, I met a stunning woman who took the same bus every day at the same stop at the same time.
She even worked at a securities firm near my office.
>> She worked at an accounting firm close to where I work.
I was happy and excited to see her every morning.
>> Seeing her every morning made me pleased and excited.
But I wasn't brave enough to tell her.
>> However, I lacked the courage to tell her that.
Then, about two months later, I finally mustered up the courage to talk to her.
>> After a period roughly two months, I eventually mustered up the courage to speak with her.
She said that she had been actually curious about me when she saw me at the bus stop every morning.
>> She had been genuinely curious about me when she saw me at the bus stop every morning.
And we became friends who sometimes ate out and went out to play in the countryside.
>> We ended up becoming friends who occasionally went out to play in the countryside and ate out.
But unfortunately, we couldn't progress into a romantic relationship and broke up.
>> Unfortunately we were unable to develop into a romantic relationship and parted ways.
I sometimes think back to those days and wonder where she is and what she is doing now.
>> Every now and then, I wonder where she is and what she is doing, thinking back to those days.
And I wish her to live happily ever after.
>> I hope she has a happy and fulfilling life.
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