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Are there any subjects or topics where you feel textbooks could be improved? How?

작성자: 박*호
2024-07-16 329

회원님의 영작문

It's been so long since I graduated from school that I don't know much about current textbooks.
So, I will talk about it based on my experience when I was a high school student.
I was in high school in the early to mid 1980s. I studied math hard and got good grades.
However, most of my friends hated math because they had to memorize a lot of formulas.
I also found memorizing math formulas really boring.
Afterwards, in college, I learned why those mathematical formulas were created and where they were used, and from then on, mathematics became fun.
Saint-Exupéry, a famous French writer and author of The Little Prince, said this.
If you want someone to build a boat, have them yearn for the sea.
I hope that textbooks will be improved to be more interesting so that students can study at school with interest and enjoyment.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Sun!

Textbooks could be improved by enhancing engagement through real-world relevance, incorporating accessibility features for diverse learners, adding interactive elements for practice, ensuring cultural sensitivity and diversity representation, integrating technology effectively, and providing flexibility in content delivery and customization options. These improvements would make textbooks more effective tools for learning in modern educational contexts.

- Kristine ^^ 

It's been so long since I graduated from school that I don't know much about current textbooks.
>> My knowledge of current textbooks is limited because it has been so long since I graduated from school.
So, I will talk about it based on my experience when I was a high school student.
>> Thus, I will tackle it from the perspective I had during my high school experience.
I was in high school in the early to mid 1980s. I studied math hard and got good grades.
>> The early to mid-1980s were when I was in high school. I did well in math class because I studied hard.
However, most of my friends hated math because they had to memorize a lot of formulas.
>> Correct. 
I also found memorizing math formulas really boring.
>> Correct. 
Afterwards, in college, I learned why those mathematical formulas were created and where they were used, and from then on, mathematics became fun.
>> After that, math turned fascinating for me in college when I discovered the applications and reasons for the creation of those mathematical formulas.
Saint-Exupéry, a famous French writer and author of The Little Prince, said this.
>> This was said by renowned French author Saint-Exupéry, the creator of The Little Prince.
If you want someone to build a boat, have them yearn for the sea.
>> Correct. 
I hope that textbooks will be improved to be more interesting so that students can study at school with interest and enjoyment.
>> I wish greater attention to detail will be put into textbooks so that students will be engaged and enjoying their studies in the classroom.
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