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Writing Task: When was the last time an e-mail made you very happy or excited about something?

I felt great when I received an email from my Clinical Trial Manager regarding great job. Her name is Petro, she always encourages me and makes me happy. She expressed that we are good team and we can walk throgh the hard time together.
I learned communication skills through her.

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Hi, Mi Young! I can see that you put a lot of effort into your work, and it shows! Please focus more on correct verb tenses and sentence structure. Spend a little extra time each day practicing the areas where you had difficulties.

- Teacher Angela

I felt great when I received an email from my Clinical Trial Manager regarding great job.
>> I felt great when I received an email from my Clinical Trial Manager regarding a job well done.

 Her name is Petro, she always encourages me and makes me happy. 
>> Her name is Petro. She always encourages me and makes me happy.

She expressed that we are good team and we can walk throgh the hard time together.
>> She expressed that we are a good team and that we can get through hard times together.

I learned communication skills through her.
>> I learned communication skills from her.
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