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I don't know I understand this sentence well, but I think different treatment based on gender is discrimination.
I have to understand the gender differences, but I don't know if I have to treat them differently.
So, I think it's best not to expect to be treated rather than being treated differently.

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Hi Da Hye,

You did a good job expressing your thoughts! It can be confusing to understand how to treat people fairly. It's important to treat everyone with respect, regardless of gender. It's okay to keep learning and thinking about these ideas. Keep up the good work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I don't know I understand this sentence well, but I think different treatment based on gender is discrimination.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I'm not sure I fully understand this sentence, but I believe treating people differently based on gender is discrimination.

I have to understand the gender differences, but I don't know if I have to treat them differently.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I need to understand gender differences, but I'm not sure if that means treating them differently.

So, I think it's best not to expect to be treated rather than being treated differently.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, I think it's best not to expect special treatment instead of being treated differently.

 

 

 

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