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How do modern children\'s books differ from classic ones in terms of style, language, and themes?

작성자: 박*호
2024-07-11 339

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I sadly don't know much about children's books.
When my daughters were young, I was too busy with work to experience the joy of reading children's books with them, and now that my children are already adults, I have no opportunity to read children's books.
However, I can make some comparisons between modern children's books and classic children's books.
First of all, modern children's books seem to focus primarily on stimulating children's curiosity and allowing them to enjoy reading.
On the other hand, classic children's books seem to focus on teaching something.
As a result, modern children's books are likely to have many more colorful illustrations than classic children's books.
Also, while classic books mainly deal with traditional fairy tales that encourage good and evil, modern children's books seem to deal with more friendly subjects such as nature and pets.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Sun! 

Modern children's literature tends to reflect evolving societal norms, diverse perspectives, and contemporary storytelling techniques, making it more relatable and relevant to today's young readers.

- Kristine ^^

I sadly don't know much about children's books.
>> Correct.
When my daughters were young, I was too busy with work to experience the joy of reading children's books with them, and now that my children are already adults, I have no opportunity to read children's books.
>> I never got to enjoy the pleasure of reading children's books with my daughters when they were young because I was always too busy at work, and now that they are grown ups, I don't get to do it anymore.
However, I can make some comparisons between modern children's books and classic children's books.
>> I can draw some comparisons between classic children's literature and modern children's literature, though.
First of all, modern children's books seem to focus primarily on stimulating children's curiosity and allowing them to enjoy reading.
>> Correct.
On the other hand, classic children's books seem to focus on teaching something.
>> Correct.
As a result, modern children's books are likely to have many more colorful illustrations than classic children's books.
>> Hence, compared to classic children's books, modern children's books likely contain a lot more vibrant illustrations.
Also, while classic books mainly deal with traditional fairy tales that encourage good and evil, modern children's books seem to deal with more friendly subjects such as nature and pets.
>> Furthermore, modern children's books seem to focus on more amiable topics like nature and pets, whereas old books mostly deal with conventional fairy tales that promote good and evil.
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