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What was your most memorable job interview experience?

작성자: 김*주
2024-07-11 592

회원님의 영작문

I had a chance to interview at an autonomous mobile cart company located in Daejeon, which is known for Korea’s top tech college, KAIST. The company was founded by KAIST undergraduate students, and there were around 50 employees, most of whom have degrees from KAIST and were quite young. During my interview for a designer position, I had a one-on-one interview with a young interviewer. The interview was casual. I had already sent them my portfolio, and it seemed she had reviewed it carefully. During the interview, she listened attentively to my story and background, and I had a good feeling about the company. After the interview, she gave me a short tour of the company. I really wanted to work with such smart people. However, when I received the acceptance email, the pay was much lower than I expected. I was quite naive and also scared to discuss sensitive topics such as compensation. Now if I have a chance like that again, I would be a lot more confident with negotiating.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Minju! Thank you for sharing your memorable experience! This was an interesting story with a moral in the end. ^^ Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
I had a chance to interview at an autonomous mobile cart company located in Daejeon, which is known for Korea’s top tech college, KAIST.
>>I had a chance to be interviewed at an autonomous mobile cart company located in Daejeon, which is known for Korea’s top tech college, KAIST.
The company was founded by KAIST undergraduate students, and there were around 50 employees, most of whom have degrees from KAIST and were quite young.
>>The company was founded by KAIST undergraduate students, and it had around 50 employees, most of whom were young and had degrees from KAIST.
 During my interview for a designer position, I had a one-on-one interview with a young interviewer. 
>>CORRECT
The interview was casual. 
>> CORRECT
I had already sent them my portfolio, and it seemed she had reviewed it carefully.
>>I had already sent them my portfolio, and it seemed that she had reviewed it carefully.
During the interview, she listened attentively to my story and background, and I had a good feeling about the company.
>>CORRECT
After the interview, she gave me a short tour of the company.
>>CORRECT
I really wanted to work with such smart people.
>>CORRECT
However, when I received the acceptance email, the pay was much lower than I expected.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>However, the pay offered in the acceptance email was significantly below my expectations.
 I was quite naive and also scared to discuss sensitive topics such as compensation.
>>CORRECT
Now if I have a chance like that again, I would be a lot more confident with negotiating.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>If I were to have another opportunity like that, I would approach negotiations with much more confidence.
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