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HOMEWORK:
What advice would you give a high school student who is about to go to college?

There's nothing I can tell you.
Their world is what they live in and the result is what they accept.
It is the beginning of the year to graduate from high school and enter university.
I don't want them to be buried in academics or employment.
In four precious years, they enjoy and enjoy themselves to the fullest, thinking about their future course
I hope you make a lot of friends and live a life that fulfills your responsibilities.
Even if it is a bad experience, I believe it can be an essential experience when living in society later.

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Hello Mr. Lee!
You are right, I guess, freshmen in Korea should be given a chance to fully enjoy themselves because they had a hard time preparing for the university exams.
Have a good day!
T. Aki~

QUESTION: What advice would you give a high school student who is about to go to college?

There's nothing I can tell you.
>>> CORRECT!

Their world is what they live in and the result is what they accept.
>>> CORRECT!

It is the beginning of the year to graduate from high school and enter university.
>>> CORRECT!

I don't want them to be buried in academics or employment.
>>> CORRECT!

In four precious years, they enjoy and enjoy themselves to the fullest, thinking about their future course
>>> CORRECT!

I hope you make a lot of friends and live a life that fulfills your responsibilities.
>>> CORRECT!

Even if it is a bad experience, I believe it can be an essential experience when living in society later.
>>> CORRECT!

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