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HOMEWORK:
What things about summer do you like most and least?

I like to eat food in summer.
There are many foods that can only be eaten in summer in our country.
I'm very happy when I eat foods that I can't eat in winter.
I also like to go to the beach. I feel happy when I go to the beach with my friends or family and enjoy summer vacation.

However, there are many insects and pests in the summer.
Especially when mosquitoes suck my blood because there are a lot of mosquitoes, I feel an unbearable itch and pain.
I also don't like the hot weather.
Summer is inevitably hot, but feeling the stinging sun and humid heat gives you a dizziness and headache.
I want to turn on the air conditioner, but it's a pity that I can't turn it on often because the electricity bill is expensive.

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Good morning, Mr. Lee!
It's nice to hear that you have likes and dislikes about summer, Well, there is nothing perfect. Even the most beautiful things in life can be seen differently.
Enjoy the day!
T. Aki~

What things about summer do you like most and least?

I like to eat food in summer.
>>> CORRECT!

There are many foods that can only be eaten in summer in our country.
>>> Many foods can only be eaten in summer in our country.

I'm very happy when I eat foods that I can't eat in winter.
>>> CORRECT!

I also like to go to the beach. I feel happy when I go to the beach with my friends or family and enjoy summer vacation.
>>> CORRECT!

However, there are many insects and pests in the summer.
>>> CORRECT!

Especially when mosquitoes suck my blood because there are a lot of mosquitoes, I feel an unbearable itch and pain.
>>> CORRECT!

I also don't like the hot weather.
>>> CORRECT!

Summer is inevitably hot, but feeling the stinging sun and humid heat gives you a dizziness and headache.
>>> Summer is inevitably hot, but feeling the stinging sun and humid heat gives you dizziness and headache.

I want to turn on the air conditioner, but it's a pity that I can't turn it on often because the electricity bill is expensive.
>>> CORRECT!
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