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How should one respond to questions during an interview?

작성자: 이*윤
2024-07-10 491

회원님의 영작문

First of all, I think it's important for me not to be nervous.
When I was nervous, my head turned white, and I couldn't hear the question and couldn't think of the answer. Also, there were many things I wanted to say, but I couldn't put many things in the answer.
During the interview, the questions you asked yourself should be answered in a clear voice while staring at each interviewer. It's important to use polite expressions, and it doesn't matter if you stutter your answers, but it's not good if you do it too much. And I like honest answers, but I don't like them even if they're too honest.
You should listen to the questions you asked to others during the interview and express in action that you are listening carefully. In the meantime, you may organize your answers.
I don't know interviews in other countries, but Korea has a hard atmosphere for interview, and you shouldn't be too confident or too nervous, and you have to give specific answers or avoid in some questions.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!~I believe that your personality has a big impact on the atmosphere. The more confident you are in answering questions, the better you feel. Nonetheless, I hope you are able to utilize the things you discussed during your interview.
Chammy

First of all, I think it's important for me not to be nervous.
When I was nervous, my head turned white, and I couldn't hear the question and couldn't think of the answer. 
Also, there were many things I wanted to say, but I couldn't put many things in the answer.
OR
>>First of all, I think it's important for me not to be nervous. When I was nervous, my mind went blank, and I couldn't hear the question or think of an answer. There were many things I wanted to say, but I couldn't fit them all into my response.

During the interview, the questions you asked yourself should be answered in a clear voice while staring at each interviewer.
>> During the interview, the questions you ask yourself should be answered in a clear voice while staring at each interviewer.
OR
>> During the interview, answer the questions clearly while maintaining eye contact with each interviewer.
 It's important to use polite expressions, and it doesn't matter if you stutter your answers, but it's not good if you do it too much. 
>>Correct
And I like honest answers, but I don't like them even if they're too honest.
>> And I like honest answers, but I don't like them even if they're too honest.
You should listen to the questions you asked to others during the interview and express in action that you are listening carefully. 
>> During the interview, you should pay attention to the questions they ask other candidates and show by doing so that you are paying close attention.
In the meantime, you may organize your answers. I don't know interviews in other countries, but Korea has a hard atmosphere for interview, and you shouldn't be too confident or too nervous, and you have to give specific answers or avoid in some questions.
OR
>>You can prepare your responses in the meantime. I'm not familiar with interviews conducted in other countries, but in Korea, the interview process can be challenging. You should avoid appearing overconfident or anxious, and you must provide detailed answers to some queries.
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