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What are some rude gestures in your country?

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2024-07-10 393

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In Korea, there are some gestures that are considered rude.
First, sitting with legs crossed during classes on school or university. Crossing legs does not matter when I work, eat and take a coffee with my friends or family. However, when I listen to a professor’s lecture or when I attend a business meeting with a boss, sitting with legs crossed may be considered rude.

Second, waving hands high to an older person is rude gestures in Korea. Instead of waving hand, we usually bow our head down when we say hello to someone who older than me. It also doesn’t problem to friends.

Third, it is considered rude that getting and giving some stuffs to older people with ONE hand in Korea. We usually use two hands putting together. Korean don’t think using one hand is polite. Interesting thing is that we usually use two hands putting together even when we receive beer or Soju(Korean alcohol) from an older person! HAHA

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Hello, Yura! Thank you for sharing these interesting things. I am surprised to know about these gestures. You surely made time to do your homework. Keep it up! Have a good day! ^^
~T. Jewel
In Korea, there are some gestures that are considered rude.
>>CORRECT
First, sitting with legs crossed during classes on school or university.
>>First, sitting with legs crossed during classes at school or university is considered rude.
Crossing legs does not matter when I work, eat and take a coffee with my friends or family.
>> Crossing my legs doesn't matter when I'm working, eating, or having coffee with my friends or family.
However, when I listen to a professor’s lecture or when I attend a business meeting with a boss, sitting with legs crossed may be considered rude.
>>However, when I listen to a professor's lecture or attend a business meeting with a boss, sitting with my legs crossed may be considered rude.
Second, waving hands high to an older person is rude gestures in Korea.
>>Second, waving hands high to an older person is considered rude in Korea.
Instead of waving hand, we usually bow our head down when we say hello to someone who older than me.
>> Instead of waving hands, we usually bow our heads when saying hello to someone older.
It also doesn’t problem to friends.
>> However, this isn't problem among friends.
Third, it is considered rude that getting and giving some stuffs to older people with ONE hand in Korea.
>>Third, it is considered rude to receive or give items to older people with only one hand in Korea.
We usually use two hands putting together. 
>>We usually put two hands together. 
Korean don’t think using one hand is polite.
>>Koreans don't consider it polite to use only one hand.
Interesting thing is that we usually use two hands putting together even when we receive beer or Soju(Korean alcohol) from an older person! HAHA
>>An interesting thing is that we usually use both hands even when receiving beer or soju from an older person! HAHA!
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