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Can you describe a piece of music that has a special meaning to you? What emotions does it evoke?

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I enjoy listening to movie music.
I like it when I listen to movie music after watching movies because it reminds me of the main scenes or story of the movie.
In particular, I really like the movies Legends Of The Fall and Titanic. Even though it's been 30 years since I saw the two movies, when I listen to the movie music, the scenes from the movies come to mind vividly. The Legend Of The Fall depicts the love, conflict, and death of a family with three sons against the backdrop of the vast nature of the American West.
Titanic is a story about the passionate love of a couple that happened when the huge ship called Titanic, crossing the Atlantic Ocean from England to America, sank.
When I listen to The Ludlows, the theme music of The Legend Of The Fall, I get emotional because it reminds me of the vast nature of the American West, the background of the movie, and when I listen to the theme song My Heart Will Go On from Titanic, it reminds me of the sad love story of the main characters.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Sun! 

Music profoundly affects emotions, as it can elicit a wide range of feelings, from happiness and relaxation to anxiety and anger. Studies have shown that music can influence perception, with listeners associating upbeat music with happy faces and melancholic music with sad faces.

- Kristine ^^ 

I enjoy listening to movie music.
>> I like listening to soundtracks from movies.
I like it when I listen to movie music after watching movies because it reminds me of the main scenes or story of the movie.
>> After watching a movie, I enjoy listening to the soundtrack because it brings back memories of important moments or plot points.
In particular, I really like the movies Legends Of The Fall and Titanic.
>> I especially enjoyed watching Titanic and Legends of the Fall.
Even though it's been 30 years since I saw the two movies, when I listen to the movie music, the scenes from the movies come to mind vividly.
>> Even though I haven't seen the two films in thirty years, I can still clearly recall the scenes when I listen to the movie soundtrack.
The Legend Of The Fall depicts the love, conflict, and death of a family with three sons against the backdrop of the vast nature of the American West.
>> In The Legend Of The Fall, the immense expanse of the American West serves as a background for the love, conflict, and eventual death of a family consisting of three sons.
Titanic is a story about the passionate love of a couple that happened when the huge ship called Titanic, crossing the Atlantic Ocean from England to America, sank.
>> The movie Titanic tells the tale of a couple's intense love that ended when the massive vessel that was traveling across the Atlantic from England to America sank.
When I listen to The Ludlows, the theme music of The Legend Of The Fall, I get emotional because it reminds me of the vast nature of the American West, the background of the movie, and when I listen to the theme song My Heart Will Go On from Titanic, it reminds me of the sad love story of the main characters.
>> My Heart Will Go On, the Titanic theme song, reminds me of the main characters' depressing love story, and The Ludlows' theme music of The Legend Of The Fall, makes me feel nostalgic for the vastness of the American West, which serves as the movie's background.
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