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Have you ever been to a live comedy show? How was it?

작성자: 박*호
2024-07-05 534

회원님의 영작문

Unfortunately, I have never been to a live comedy show.
When live comedy shows were very popular in Korea, I was in the early years of my working life, so I couldn't afford to go to live comedy shows.
But even then, I enjoyed watching comedy shows on TV.
There was a legendary Korean comedian more than 20 years ago.
He was an unknown actor for a long time and had a hard time because of his ugly face.
Then at some point, the ugly face began to attract people's attention, and he turned into a comedian, entertaining many audiences on live shows.
He was always on stage alone.
He captivated the audience with his unique clumsiness, outstanding vocal description, and hilarious dance.
He died of cancer more than 20 years ago, but many Koreans still miss him.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, Sun! 

Thanks for doing your homework this week. Enjoy your weekend!

- Kristine ^^ 

Unfortunately, I have never been to a live comedy show.
>> Sadly, I've never gone to a live comedy show. 
When live comedy shows were very popular in Korea, I was in the early years of my working life, so I couldn't afford to go to live comedy shows.
>> I was just starting my career and couldn't afford to go to live comedy shows, even though they were highly popular in Korea at the time.
But even then, I enjoyed watching comedy shows on TV.
>> Even so, I like watching comedies on television.
There was a legendary Korean comedian more than 20 years ago.
>> Correct.
He was an unknown actor for a long time and had a hard time because of his ugly face.
>> He struggled due to his unattractive face and remained unknown performer for a long period of time.
Then at some point, the ugly face began to attract people's attention, and he turned into a comedian, entertaining many audiences on live shows.
>> Eventually, the hideous face started to draw attention, and he became a comedian who delighted large audiences in live performances.
He was always on stage alone.
>> He always performed by himself. 
He captivated the audience with his unique clumsiness, outstanding vocal description, and hilarious dance.
>> His distinctive awkwardness, superb vocal description, and amusing movement captured the attention of the crowd.
He died of cancer more than 20 years ago, but many Koreans still miss him.
>> Even though he passed away from cancer 20 years ago, many Koreans still miss him.
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