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How would you describe an ideal weekend?

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For me, there are two types of ideal weekend.
First, a weekend that filled with things that I¡¯ve wanted to do in every day life. Even though it feels busy, there should be no wasted time. 
For example, on Friday night I hang out with my friends and drink good wine at a nice place until late at night.
On Saturday, after oversleeping, I cook and eat a lunch. In the afternoon, I go to play tennis. And I go to eat grilled lamb especially lamb ribs. When I get home, I take a shower, lay down, watch Netflix, and fall asleep with.
On Sunday, I go to a church and get cold noodles (called Naengmyeon in Korean). In the afternoon, I go to an exhibition that I wanted to see.

Second type of ideal weekend for me is totally opposite to the first one, a weekend doing nothing at all. I just clean up my bedroom and take a walk with my dog. I take a rest completely. This type of weekend is what I need actually.

However, I prefer the first one to the second one haha.

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Hi, Yura! Your ideal weekends are completely on point. ^^ Thank you for taking time sharing your insights. Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
For me, there are two types of ideal weekend.
>>For me, there are two types of ideal weekends.
First, a weekend that filled with things that I¡¯ve wanted to do in every day life.
>>First, a weekend that is filled with all of the things that I¡¯ve wanted to do in my every day life.
 Even though it feels busy, there should be no wasted time.
>> Even though it feels busy, there should be no wasted time.
For example, on Friday night I hang out with my friends and drink good wine at a nice place until late at night.
>>For example, on Friday night, I hang out with my friends and drink good wine at a nice place until late at night.
On Saturday, after oversleeping, I cook and eat a lunch.
>>On Saturday, after oversleeping, I cook and eat lunch.
 In the afternoon, I go to play tennis. And I go to eat grilled lamb especially lamb ribs.
>> In the afternoon, I play tennis and eat grilled lamb ribs.
When I get home, I take a shower, lay down, watch Netflix, and fall asleep with.
>>When I get home, I take a shower, lay down, watch Netflix, and fall asleep.
On Sunday, I go to a church and get cold noodles (called Naengmyeon in Korean).
>>On Sunday, I go to church and eat naengmyeon -- Korean cold noodles.
In the afternoon, I go to an exhibition that I wanted to see.
>>In the afternoon, I go to an exhibition.
Second type of ideal weekend for me is totally opposite to the first one, a weekend doing nothing at all.
>>The second type of my ideal weekend is totally the opposite of the first one --- a weekend doing nothing at all.
I just clean up my bedroom and take a walk with my dog.
>>CORRECT
I take a rest completely.
>>I take a complete rest.
This type of weekend is what I need actually.
>>This type of weekend is what I actually need.
However, I prefer the first one to the second one haha.
>>However, I prefer the first.  Haha.
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