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What is the most challenging part of your job?

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What is the most challenging part of your job?

I really love my job and I have passion about doing my work. I also want to complete my daily work task perfectly. But sometimes it is incredibly difficult for me.

The most challenging part of my job is overcoming a pressure every day. Since it requires me to speak accurately every time, I feel big pressure to do not make any single mistake. Also, pressure makes me lose control. Because all News program broadcasts LIVE, keeping mind control is the most important thing to the News casters.
That¡¯s why I try to make me feel comfortable, stay calm when I go into the News studio every day.

Beside this, there are many challenging parts of my job such as, being a morning person, keeping my body in good condition every day without exception.

Nevertheless, it makes me feel happy and have a sense of accomplishment. I love my job!

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Hello, Yura! I am delighted reading your answer. I admire your passion and diligence in your work. Thank you for taking time to answer your homework! 
~ T. Jewel
I really love my job and I have passion about doing my work.
>> I really love my job and I am passionate about doing my work.
I also want to complete my daily work task perfectly.
>> I also want to complete my daily tasks at work perfectly.
But sometimes it is incredibly difficult for me.
>>But sometimes, it could be incredibly difficult. 
The most challenging part of my job is overcoming a pressure every day.
>>The most challenging part of my job is overcoming pressure every day.
Since it requires me to speak accurately every time, I feel big pressure to do not make any single mistake.
>> Since my job requires me to speak accurately every time, I feel pressured not to make any mistakes.
Also, pressure makes me lose control.
>>Also, pressure can make me lose control.
Because all News program broadcasts LIVE, keeping mind control is the most important thing to the News casters.
>>Since all news programs are broadcast live, maintaining control of the mind is the most important thing for us newscasters.
That¡¯s why I try to make me feel comfortable, stay calm when I go into the News studio every day.
>>That¡¯s why I try to make myself feel comfortable and stay calm when I go into the news studio every day.
Beside this, there are many challenging parts of my job such as, being a morning person, keeping my body in good condition every day without exception.
>>Besides this, there are many challenging parts of my job, such as being a morning person and keeping my body in good condition every day without exception.
Nevertheless, it makes me feel happy and have a sense of accomplishment. 
>>Nevertheless, it makes me feel happy and gives me a sense of accomplishment.
I love my job!
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