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I like a pretty and comfortable coffee shop. Of course, the taste of coffee is important, but the atmosphere is also the important thing when I choose one. If the atmosphere is not good, I don't want to stay any more. I think good atmosphere means good service the coffee shop provide to customers.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I agree! Sometimes the ambiance of a coffee shop makes it unique from others and is the reason why people visit it. Also, ensuring that the atmosphere is good means making sure that customers are relaxed and comfortable in the cafe.
- T. Caitlyn
I like a pretty and comfortable coffee shop. 
>> CORRECT
Of course, the taste of coffee is important, but the atmosphere is also the important thing when I choose one. 
>> Of course, the taste of coffee is important, but the atmosphere is also important when I choose one.
If the atmosphere is not good, I don't want to stay any more. 
>> CORRECT
I think good atmosphere means good service the coffee shop provide to customers.
>> I think a good atmosphere means good service provided by the coffee shop to customers.
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