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I saw the movie that is ¡°a crime town¡±. I¡¯ve already said, this movie was exciting. My heart was pumped! And the movie main character is strongest in the movie story. By the way, an actor really looks like strongest, too. So i think this movie is cause famous.

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Hi, Hye Yeon! I'm glad you enjoyed the movie! It sounds thrilling. The main character must be impressive, and it's interesting that the actor also fits the role well. It's no surprise the movie is gaining fame!

I saw the movie that is ¡°a crime town¡±. 
>>I saw the movie called 'A Crime Town.
I¡¯ve already said this movie was exciting. 
Correct, or
>>I¡¯ve already said that this movie was a real nail-biter.
My heart was pumped! 
Correct, or
>>My heart was racing with excitement!
And the movie main character is strongest in the movie story. 
>>The main character in the movie is the strongest in the story.
By the way, an actor really looks like strongest, too. 
>>By the way, the actor really embodies strength as well.
So i think this movie is cause famous.
>>So I think these are the factors which have made this movie famous.
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