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What are good study habits?

I think it's good to keep up with my studying.
Not to put it off every day and to review it well is good.
Then I don't have to study hard later.

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Hello, Jessica!
We avoid tasks or put them off because we do not believe we'll enjoy doing them, and want to avoid making ourselves unhappy, or we fear that we won't do them well. To avoid procrastinating, you have to find joy in studying and it will be a lot easier. Good luck with your exams! ^^ You can do it. :)
~ Teacher Trixia

Content:
I think it's good to keep up with my studying.
- I think it is good to keep up with my studies.
OR >>> I think it is beneficial for me to continue studying.
Not to put it off every day and to review it well is good.
- To not put it off every day and to review it well is good.
OR >>> It is a good idea to review it thoroughly and not put it off every day.
Then I don't have to study hard later.
- CORRECT.
OR >>> I won't have to study harder afterward.

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