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HOMEWORK: Please complete the sentences:
1. I want to drink coffee every morning.
2. I wanted to have dinner with my mom at Chinese restaurant because She had never tried dim sum.
3. I will want to go to swimming pool on saturday.

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Hi, Ms. Nami! Thank you for the great sentences. I hope you'll be able to do all you wanted to do The corrections here are mostly on spelling and capitalizations. Your sentences are great. Let us practice more again soon. See you!
--Teacher Anji


1. I want to drink coffee every morning.
>> CORRECT
2. I wanted to have dinner with my mom at Chinese restaurant because She had never tried dim sum.
>> I wanted to have dinner with my mom at a Chinese restaurant because she had never tried dim sum.
3. I will want to go to swimming pool on saturday.
>>  I will want to go to the swimming pool on Saturday.
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