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When is it important and helpful to tell the truth?

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When it comes to work, I think it should be said very clearly if they are doing right or not, based on the truth.
Or, Someone is about to go wrong way, who I care about very much and the one also knows either, I would give advice or tell my frank opinion about their problem.
I have no choice but to believe it will help them.

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Hello there, Ms. Anna! It's admirable that you prioritize honesty and clarity when it comes to work and relationships. Being straightforward about what's right or wrong can indeed be crucial in guiding others towards making better decisions. 
~T. Jenna

When it comes to work, I think it should be said very clearly if they are doing right or not, based on the truth.
Correct, or
>>When it comes to work, it's crucial to clearly communicate whether someone is doing things correctly, based on objective truths.
Or, Someone is about to go wrong way, who I care about very much and the one also knows either, I would give advice or tell my frank opinion about their problem.
>>Or, if someone I care about very much is about to go the wrong way and knows it, I would give advice or express my frank opinion about their problem.
I have no choice but to believe it will help them.
Correct, or
>>I am compelled to believe that it will benefit them.
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