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How does the development of high-performance fabrics and materials influence the design and function

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2024-06-27 1003

회원님의 영작문

I believe that the development of high-performance fabrics and materials greatly improve the design and functionality of sportswear.
These days, when I watch track and field or swimming competitions on TV, I am often amazed by the sophistication and new look of the athletes' sportswear.
I think that high-performance fabrics were developed and probably applied to sportswear.
I will talk about the impact of high-performance fabrics and materials on sportswear.
High-performance fabrics are more breathable, lightweight, and moisture-wicking, staying athletes comfortable.
And advanced fabrics are often more durable and resistant to wear and tear.
And also the materials provide better stretch and flexibility.
And additionally high-performance fabrics can help regulate body temperature, keeping athletes cool in the heat and warm in the cold.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Thursday, Sun! 

High-performance fabrics enhance sportswear with better comfort, fit, durability, moisture management, and temperature regulation, improving athletes' performance and gear longevity.

- Kristine ^^ 

I believe that the development of high-performance fabrics and materials greatly improve the design and functionality of sportswear.
>> I believe that the development of high-performance fabrics and materials greatly improves the design and functionality of sportswear.
These days, when I watch track and field or swimming competitions on TV, I am often amazed by the sophistication and new look of the athletes' sportswear.
>> Correct. 
I think that high-performance fabrics were developed and probably applied to sportswear.
>> High-performance fabrics were developed, and sportswear was likely one of its uses.
I will talk about the impact of high-performance fabrics and materials on sportswear.
>> Correct. 
High-performance fabrics are more breathable, lightweight, and moisture-wicking, staying athletes comfortable.
>> High-performance fabrics are more breathable, lightweight, and moisture-wicking, keeping athletes comfortable.
And advanced fabrics are often more durable and resistant to wear and tear.
>> Furthermore, advanced fabrics tend to be more durable and less prone to damage.
And also the materials provide better stretch and flexibility.
>> Additionally, the materials have improved flexibility and stretch.
And additionally high-performance fabrics can help regulate body temperature, keeping athletes cool in the heat and warm in the cold.
>> High-performance fabrics can also aid in controlling body temperature, keeping athletes warm in the winter and cool in the summer.
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